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Chapter 2: Friends Turned E... by ~YuseiDarkUmbreon:iconYuseiDarkUmbreon:



Chapter 2: Friends Turned Enemies

I winced for the attack to come. But it never did. I felt a shove, and heard a grunt. I opened an eye, and saw that Evan had blocked the attack. I looked a little further down the hall and also saw him behind Yugi. "What's going on here? Can anyone hear what I'm saying?" This time, Sanja did not translate. She realized what I was doing. My psychic link with my trainer would translate what I said, and only the real Evan would hear it.
"I'll tell you what's going on." Said the one closer to me. "The one behind Yugi is an imposter!"
"No, you're the imposter!" said the one farther back. The one closer to me, I trusted a little more, because he blocked the attack from hitting me.
The one farther back reached for the other one's face, as if trying to rip off a mask. After struggling with it for a minute or two, he gave up, and the other said "Let me tell you why you couldn't get it off." And ripped off the face of the one farther back without even trying all that hard. Then the rest of what was obviously a disguise followed. A Machoke was revealed. "It's because I'm not the imposter!" The one farther back turned out to be the imposter!
I cowered behind the real Evan. I really didn't know what to do. Luckily for me, I didn't have to take this one. Yet, at least. "Kudon, Ice B-" he began. The imposter was already gone. "Curse that Demona. Come on, we have to get ready for a battle."
In another room, Evan told us what I didn't want to hear. "Team Galactic has put some sort of mind control device in Yugi. I don't know how to stop it. But for now, unfortunately, you have to either attack to kill, or be killed."
With that, Evan led me out of the room and back to the battle grounds.
I looked across the field. There were floating platforms, so I had a feeling that Yugi would be stronger on the field. I hopped on a platform. I decided that this could be an advantage. After all, I'm a Dark-type. Psychic-type moves don't affect me at all here. Plus, I have a Psychic-type move. I also have Dark-type moves, which are super effective on Psychic-types. But, I was bothered by what Evan said…
…Either attack to kill, or be killed.
©2009-2010 ~YuseiDarkUmbreon
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Author's Comments

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Chapter 2 of my fanfiction, Galactic Shadows.

[Yusei:] I knew that horrible person couldn't be Evan! But now I'll have to go into battle against my friend, and I'll have to kill if I want to live! I don't know if I can do this...

[Evan:] I'm with my Umbreon all the way. If he can't bring himself to kill Yugi... well, first we will see what he does do.

[Yugi:] Thank goodness Evan stepped in. My body still seems to have a mind of its own. It won't do anything I tell it to do!

[Author:] Sorry I was late with this one.

Pokémon and Yu-Gi-Oh are not mine, they are copyrighted by their respective owners, and infringement of that copyright is not my intent. The plot is mostly mine, but, again, using Team Galactic as the main enemy is an idea that I give credit to :iconwes1234: and :iconeeveexpert: for. The characters are mine, unless stated otherwise, and any resemblance to existing characters, real or ficticious, is pure coincidence, again, unless stated otherwise.

Prologue: [link]
Previous: [link]
Next: To be posted on the fourth of January, 2010.

Sorry I was late with this one.

Still don't have any comments or favs :'(... But I promised myself I'd keep going even if I don't get any comments or favs by the end of the series.

Not to brag, but my Pokédex's Vaporeon was favorited before I even had a chance to link any of my other Pokédex entries to it! :P

Stats:

"Files" (or sets of about 50,000 characters) used so far: 1.44
Chapters completed: 15 + Prologue
Currently: Revamping the 12th chapter.

Preview image will be added soon...

One last thing, this is my first time using Microsoft Office 2007. Ever.

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:iconmurd-tuffin:
I'm just a little confused. What exactly is going on?

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Philippians 2:3 Do nothing out of selfish ambition or vain conceit, but in humility consider others better than yourselves...Your attitude should be the same as that of Christ Jesus.
:iconyuseidarkumbreon:
The beginning of the chapter was confusing to WRITE...

And the end of the chapter is supposed to leave you confused.

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I want it too! ElfFreak doesn't even know what it is but we both want it!

I comment as though I am an Umbreon. REMEMBER THAT!
:iconmurd-tuffin:
Well, I guess it did the job^^;

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Philippians 2:3 Do nothing out of selfish ambition or vain conceit, but in humility consider others better than yourselves...Your attitude should be the same as that of Christ Jesus.
:iconyuseidarkumbreon:
Yep.

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I want it too! ElfFreak doesn't even know what it is but we both want it!

I comment as though I am an Umbreon. REMEMBER THAT!
:iconshibara:
Wow!! This is a really cool story so far! I can't wait to read more! Poor Yugi and Yusei.. (I thought I was reading a Yu-Gi-Oh story right at the beginning of the first chapter at first XP) But, yeah.. this is awesome so far! *really gets me motivated to write more of my own too*

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If you cried when Repliku (Riku's replica) faded into the darkness copy and paste this into your signature.
:iconyuseidarkumbreon:
*me to self* Yay! A comment! This is only the second comment total on any of my things, btw!

*me to you* Thank you! (Yeah, that's why I put an Umbreon as a preview image.) Glad to know I could help motivate you to write yours!

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I want it too! ElfFreak doesn't even know what it is but we both want it!

I comment as though I am an Umbreon. REMEMBER THAT!
:iconshibara:
Glad I could brighten your day a bit. ^^ Must have sucked to not have many comments >.>

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If you cried when Repliku (Riku's replica) faded into the darkness copy and paste this into your signature.
:iconyuseidarkumbreon:
It wasn't that my story didn't have many comments... it was that my story didn't have ANY comments. My only comment was on my very first deviation.

*starts to build a reading list for tonight*

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I want it too! ElfFreak doesn't even know what it is but we both want it!

I comment as though I am an Umbreon. REMEMBER THAT!
:iconshibara:
Oh.. right.. ^^; That's still gotta suck though.

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:iconyuseidarkumbreon:
So thanks for the :+fav: too. Also my story's first one and my second one overall.

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I want it too! ElfFreak doesn't even know what it is but we both want it!

I comment as though I am an Umbreon. REMEMBER THAT!

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